"She"... has never been written about in this way
before this moment...a chapter from "Other Rooms"
A romantic poem by Harlon Rivers
She
was the girl who held the subtle charms
of her
Scottish Highland heritage
Her
heirloom smile turned every head
with
her evocative magnetic demure
She
graced amazing moments
stealing
hearts and minds
with a
single enchanted glance
She
gracefully sashayed barefooted across
the
red clover carpet of her English Garden ,
with
the sweet angelic aura
of a
free spirited mystical goddess….
Gliding
with the elegant grace of a Swallowtail Butterfly
Skipping
elegantly from flower to flower
gathering
the sweet nectar of life.
She
wore her favorite white handmade cotton dress
she
had artistically ador ned
with
ornate delicately crocheted crimson roses
Decorated
endearingly with cross stitch and needle work
embroidery
highlights
Her
flowing waist length strawberry blonde locks
hid
the small jeweled red leather belt
highlighting
her tiny waist and breathtaking natural femininity
Her
antique ruby glass beaded necklace
glistened
in the star lit evening’s glow
Reflecting
the moon beam’s pearlescent illumination
Dazzling
the natural charms of her emerald green eyes
showcasing
the alluring beauty of an angel on earth
Her classically beautiful,
natural
peaches and cream complexion
was
enhanced by the youthful charm
of a
few random sun freckled imperfections
The
only possible, irrelevant yet self conscious,
blemish
to the perfect fragrant rose
Her
checks flushed when our eyes met for the first time
blushing
as she covered her reserved shyness
with
her tiny delicate hand
Feeling
the arousal of our emotional connected energy
ignite
the electric midnight air
Her
modesty embellished her dimpled smile,
hypnotizing
his thirsty, starving soul
An
effervescent halo glowed
as it
hovered over the fragrant flowers in her hair
She
was the most beautiful flower
in her
English Garden of Eden
And
yet she saw herself as a plain and humble free spirit
Empowered
by the gifts of compassionate,
empathetic
understanding
The
spirituality of love was interwoven
and
passionately interlaced within the very intricate threads
of
this delicate woman’s tapestry epitomizes heart and soul
She
only wanted to dance on moon beams;
to
dream of catching falling stars
All
the while, whispering breezes blew
the
traces of stardust with a whoosh
Casting
an irreversible spell
of
eternal unconditional love
The
kind of love written about tirelessly
since
the beginning of life
Eternal
love knows no beginning, there is no end;
only glimpses
of its splendor
have
ever been shared by mortal beings.
She was the answer to his prayers
He,
the prince of her Cinderella dreams
She
was his unlikely heroine fairy tale princess
For
she was born destined to be the angel of mercy,
enriching his
heaven's skies,
as he
remained rooted into the bedrock
of his
ancestors’ terrestrial ashes and dust
In a
moment of glee, in a twist of fate,
two
souls became one euphoric dream
Rescuing
him from the fields of a cold world,
during
the wrath of a perfect storm;
she
nurtured his malnourished and neglected soul,
drying
his tearful eyes as she helped him
heal
his broken heart, teaching him to love again
She
mended his broken wing
and
taught him to fly with the wind
She
blessed him with a progeny
of his
ancient spirit's realm
A
Gaelic descendant of her poignant charm
with a
resilience that would take his breath away
It was
unnatural for such a beautiful bird
to be
anything but free.
In the aftermath of an epiphany,
he
could no longer impede the magnitude
of her
love’s free spirit's shine
"Fly
away if you must my sweet angel "
...he
whispered, lovingly letting go of her hand
with a
final liberating cry ~
Blind
faith and hope fostered
the
courage to set love free
In the
silence of the waning light
the
possibility of their final moments together
faded
into the night
The
only sound heard in the abandoned silence
were
sighs too deep for words…
Written by Harlon Rivers....8/17/2012
© 2012 Harlon Rivers
6 comments:
oh my.. SHE is so beautiful.. love can not survive if if is not free but damn.. it can be terrible fearsome to let it go..
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This was the perfect length. I liked the line length as well. I'll need to read it again and again to catch all the nuances. It was so beautiful.
"He" wanted it to read and flow like the prose poem that it is but it is somewhat of an experiment in a new style for this writer...That is to say I wanted the feeling of reading a short story although there was little conversation between "she" and "he", there could have been...It was more autobiographical than live. That's really his fault because "he" wanted to spend a couple of more stanzas evolving her distinct inner and outer beauty but was afraid of losing the reader to length. I have written many shorter pieces to post here if I haven't written something new just to keep the interest up."She" never wrote so "He" will be written from the perspective of who "He" thought "She" saw him as. He's not sure if that will be next, what happens happens...If I try to make it happen it won't but I'll blog them to tie together when the time comes. Please feel free to comment with ideas.If I tie it all together there will be a 3rd piece that the ending line is already written. For me this ending line was perfect for describing this defining moment. By the way it's not rocket science it's just about life and relationships...Thanks for reading and your supportive comments!
I think the new style worked well. I hope 'he' doesn't sell himself short when he writes about himself.
I am sure any style of writing you choose will bless the spirits of many. I agree with the statements above!
Some birds are just not meant to be caged…Their feathers are just too bright…
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